Hi Sima,
Beautiful entry!  Nice thought! All the very best 
Cheers,
Opulence

well written................nice end and simple writting................telling alot in nutshell.

Sima 
bahut dino baad deekhayi diye sundar kavita hain 

sima....very   nice   write-up......Aruna

Bilkul sahi chitran kiya hai apa ne apne sunder shabdo me

sima - bahut sunder................gehri or bhavuk baat ko bahut hi sehazta se kaha hai aapne...

Sima JI,

Bahut Kum Shabdon Mein Bahut Kuchh Keh Diya Aapney.

Dear Sima,
   AchhI lagi khoobsoorat hai. yahi hota hai insaan ki jindagi mey bhi---apne hi bune jaal mey phans jaata hai: Jaise ki mera ik shaiyar hai:
 BAHUT NAAZ THAA MERI KARTOOT PE SABKO,
                                      SAMAJH BAITTHE KHUDA SE KUM TO NAHI;
HAME NAAZ THAA APNE JAAL PE ITNA,
                                       TOOFAN AANE KA KIYA KABHI GUM HI NAHI;
BUN KE JAAL 'IMAAN-O-SHARAFAT' KA 'RAJI', 
                                        KHELE PARDE KE PEECHHE 'MAKKAARI' KA KHEL,
RUKH BADLAA HAVA KA YUN EK DIN,
                                         MERI FAREBI KA HUA FIR SACHAI SE MAIL.

  Loved it sima. a good write-up. Regards. Rajee.