Sita ram ji aapki kavita likhane ki shuruyaat par bahut-bahut badhaaii aur shubhkaamnaayen . bahut achchi hai aapki kavita ,ab yah kalam rukani nahi chaahiye
Buri Baat , aapne naa Poonam ji se cheating ki hai ,Is liye aapko koi marks nahi milenge
75/100 abhi ek ans. nahi de paai aap poonam ji , Iska matalab aap paanchavi paas se tez nahi hai . Ab jaldi se bolo mai poonam mishara writer hoo ,SULEKHA par achche -achche blog post karti hoo lekin mai paanchavi paas se tez nahi hoo
Hi Priya ,
How r u ? Mujhe lagta hai shaayad koi game kheli jaa rahi hai ,maine kuch din tak sulekha par entry nahi maari ,is liye nahi jaanati lekin aapki 123 page ki pankti aur bhaav bahut achcha laga.
yash ji
tabhi to kahte hai MAKDI APNI HARKATO SE BAAZ NAHI AATI .
"E BOODHE PAUDHE BOL JARA ,US FOOL KA HAI ASTITAV KAHAA"
Pankti padhkar he ahsaas ho jaata hai ki avashay hi koi gahri baat hai is rachana me aur uske baad aapne jo bhaavo ko piroya hai padhkar lagta hi nahi ki aapne itani choti umar me yah kavita likhi hogi .Maa ke liye padhkar to man bhaavukta se bhar gaya .maa aisi hi hoti hai ,bachcho ki choti se choti cheej se bhi usko moh hota hai . bahut hi steek bhaav vyakt kiye hai aapne apni rachna me......seema
ek seep si muh khol kar taak rahi hoo ........behad sundar bhaav vyakt kiya hai aapne
BOOJHO TO JAANE( puzzles)
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